the subject matter includes pointing a video camera at a tv that it is plugged into, dating, being in your bedroom, and trying to use a vacuum cleaner that has a full bag
it is written in the 2nd person, using present and past tense
You had just left a date who didn’t hug goodbye long enough.
the narrator seems to have a lot of information about ‘you’ and ‘your’ stuff; sometimes it seems funny
You went to a bar on a weekday and spent upwards of $20.00. This wasn’t a wise move given your limited funds.
there are funny similes
The subway platform was as quiet as outer space.
the author’s note says filbert worked at a shoe factory for 17 years
here is the blink and the world goes blank page from on lives press’ website and a page 'on filbert conroy' from on lives press' website
